tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1201106762057319093.post284300949479853333..comments2008-11-25T22:09:17.704+13:00Comments on Team 14 2007: jun's cinquainAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14201129877350131853noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1201106762057319093.post-35671397460941126442007-05-09T19:45:00.000+12:002007-05-09T19:45:00.000+12:00Cool Jun I really got hooked into your poem.Maybe ...Cool Jun I really got hooked into your poem.<BR/>Maybe next time you should put more simile into It.YEINhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13099162676674204833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1201106762057319093.post-29017388023712445752007-05-02T21:12:00.000+12:002007-05-02T21:12:00.000+12:00its a good poem I really liked it.its a good poem I really liked it.Sheldonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13735028749661148233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1201106762057319093.post-24977119298843257722007-05-02T19:19:00.000+12:002007-05-02T19:19:00.000+12:00all round great poem Jun I think that the second l...all round great poem Jun I think that the second line was the bestnickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00209413082309556258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1201106762057319093.post-15680882014426787312007-05-02T16:25:00.000+12:002007-05-02T16:25:00.000+12:00Jun your poem hooked me in and I think next time t...Jun your poem hooked me in and I think next time to improve on the second line because that doesn't really feel like it belongs in the poem.<BR/>Nickynickeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12161288264205518542noreply@blogger.com